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Astrology;
Two star-crossed lovers meeting secretly,
Hands clasped under stormy skies.
If you wait for me eternally,
Love, I'll promise not to cry.
I have to ask you, darling,
Juliet,
Why do you love me so?
Because babe,
We'll last forever.

Darling, I'm no Romeo.

Hey, beautiful.
What's this?
A cup closed in your hands?
Let me lift the poison from your lips,
Together,
We'll make our demands.
Don't you ever think I'll leave you,
Darling, where could I ever go?
Juliet, we'll last forever.
Darling, I'm no Romeo.

Here comes the east,
And with the sun,
The glove upon your cheek is fair.
I touch your hands in soft surrender.
I'd give my life to be there.

Juliet, you are so very pretty;
Juliet, don't look so sad.
Juliet, I'll give you poetry
Until you smile, love,
Be glad--

Juliet, I love you,
There is nowhere I could go.
Juliet, we'll last forever.

Because Juliet,
I'm no Romeo.
:shrug:
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:icongizbear:
gizbear Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2010  Student Writer
this is really, really beautiful.
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DarkDaria713 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Student Writer
:aww: Thanks. Is for Betsy, so... ^^; Tends to turn out that way.
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gizbear Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Student Writer
i figured. but i wasn't going to ask in case it wasn't... :P has she read it yet? *doesn't know how old this is*
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DarkDaria713 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Student Writer
Yeah, and she's seen the song. ^^;
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:icongizbear:
gizbear Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010  Student Writer
ok good. just wondering. :P
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DarkDaria713 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Student Writer
:) Yeah, I wrote it after we started dating. She gets kinda inundated, though, hazard of dating a poet. Sweetheart that she is, she puts up with all my bad poetry. XD
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:icongizbear:
gizbear Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Student Writer
lawl. too bad your poetry's not bad. :P
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DarkDaria713 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Student Writer
:aww: Thanks.
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Mayaj Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2010
Okay, DAMN do I wanna write music to this...!
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Paladin343 Featured By Owner May 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
WANNA HEAR!
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